Thursday, 13 November 2014

Editing Update

Over the past 3 days I have been choosing what pictures I want to use in my title sequence from the two scenes I have shot. These scenes are when Jimmy visits his biological father’s grave and when Jimmy moves to Manchester. When I was looking over the pictures I took on Friday 7th November and Sunday 9th November I was really pleased with them. However, I have decided to change the order of my title sequence. My initial idea of lighting was to use the lighting to reflect Jimmy’s life events. Basically, natural/ bright lighting when Jimmy finally feels contempt with his life and to have natural/ dark lighting when Jimmy is dissatisfied with his life. The images I collected from Manchester City Centre were very bright and pleasant images therefore I believe these images should be used when Jimmy leaves his mother and the abuse from Blake behind him and lives life on his own. Below is a video showing the new chronological order of my opening title sequence:


This is a table showing which scenes will be in natural/ bright lighting and which will be in natural/ dark lighting:

Natural/ dark
Natural/ bright

The first 4 scenes:

Jimmy visits his biological father’s grave – he feels empty and heartbroken

Jimmy and his mother (Maggie) cry together – devastation over the loss of their beloved family member

Maggie meets Blake (arguing) – clear that it is an abusive relationship and Jimmy is devastated over this

Blake is introduced to Jimmy – Jimmy isn’t happy about Blake trying to act like his new father, Jimmy feels worthless from the way Blake treats him

The final meeting:
Jimmy meets Jerome and Burdine – he doesn’t understand why they are bullying him when he has done nothing wrong, that feeling of worthlessness is still there
The last  scenes:

Jimmy leaves Maggie and Blake – Jimmy is excited and curious about starting fresh (walking across field)

Scenes of Manchester (Jimmy’s new home) – Jimmy is happy to start his adventure

Starts at Wellington School – excited about finally starting education (his dream)

Jimmy meets Arthur – he has a trusting and caring best friend, he has never had this connection with someone before

Jimmy meets Sadie – they have both had a troubling start to life so they can talk to each other about everything

In lesson time I have now begun editing the images I have taken and considering which transitions to use. Again, I want the transitions to reflect that mood of Jimmy/ the scene. My first decision was whether use a transition called ‘lens flare’ or ‘bloom’ between the scene where Jimmy leaves him mother and Blake to introducing the images of Manchester. I wanted this transition to reflect a new beginning for Jimmy and both of these seem suitable for representing that. After much debate with myself I have decided to use ‘lens flare’ as ‘bloom’ showed orange coloured markings and therefore did not look good between the two images. Another transition I have decided to use is ‘cross dissolve’ throughout the scene where Jimmy is visiting his father’s grave. I have used a total of 7 images from this scene which are:
  • Long shot (showing the sunset and a shadow of a tree)
  • Long shot (Oliver walking down the path) x2
  • Mid shot (Oliver knelt beside grave) x3
I will use ‘cross dissolve between the images from Oliver (Jimmy) walking down the path until the final image of him praying beside the grave.
This transition is very slow moving making it easy on the eye and symbolising Jimmy is feeling empty and dissatisfied. Furthermore, it gives a real sense of continuity between the shots which is beneficial for making my title sequence look exceptional. 

My next step is to decide what length of time each image should be shown for. I originally though 5 seconds but this may change depending on the music time and the tone of the music as each image is shown. I am still yet to decide on a piece of music. When considering music I want the tone to reflect the mood of each scene, for example Jimmy visiting his biological father’s grave will have slow and opera like music whereas when the images of Manchester are shown I want the music to be upbeat and sound adventurous.

Finally, when looking at the picture I took on Friday 7th November I was pleased with the majority of them. However, when editing the long shot of the graveyard followed by Jimmy (Oliver) walking down the path there was no sense of continuity therefore I added in an image of the surrounding headstones. This made it a lot better but the lighting of the headstones of the right of me was brighter than those I took on the left of me. This means I will have to go back to Hale Crematorium and retake those images at approximately 4:30 so the lighting will be similar to those already taken. I plan to do this on Thursday 13th November. 



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